Today we began a new study…persuasive. This type of writing is different from what we have done this far because you will have to convince someone to see your side. Create a list of things you would like to persuade someone in your family, school, our city, or the world. Who knows, one may be the winning choice!
Remember, the more ideas you brainstorm the more choices you will have to write about later in our study.
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That my cousin Dylan is the best little boy ever.
ReplyDeleteTo come join 4H.
Play sports.
Working on a farm is fun.
Getting someone to come to church.
Getting people to recycle.
I want to persuade people to:
ReplyDelete1. put baseball back in the Olympics
2. give us more reading time
3. tell mom not to make the icky chinese stuff
4. give us more writing time
5. give us less recess time
6. have no homework except writing/reading
7. watch less TV
8. let kids become President
9. let kids become a Mayor
10. let kids be part of the government
11. put more comics in the newspaper
12. use less water
13. use less electricity
14. play less video games
15. play less computer
16. go to this website more
17. read more
18. let kids vote
19. let kids have pop in school
20. let kids have food in school
21. play more basketball
22. play more 2 square
23. have more 4H clubs
24. have more project selections for 4H
25. have more 4H meetings
26. to join 4H
27. go to church
28. to get more pets
29. to own a rabbit
30. to outlaw owning a dog
31. let kids make the laws
32. stop smoking
33. stop getting drunk
34. to make better choices
35. to have good character
36. to have less math
37. to recycle
38. to check over their papers
39. to buy more cheeseburgers at McDonald's
40. to eat out more
41. to eat as a family
42. to stop divorcing
43. to have science in 3rd grade
44. to go to Wayne Center
45. to commit less crimes
46. have a longer Spring Break
47. have more scheduled delays
48. have seatbelts in buses
49. don't have assigned seats in the bus
50. let the kids pick the subject they want 2 do
51. to use the telephone less
52. use less email
53. to think of shorter lists
54. use less spelling
55. have a year with no spelling
56. to have less siblings
57. have more dentist appointments
58. to outlaw shots for kids
59. to recycle paper
60. to write more poetry
61. to have more stuffed animals
62. to have your own room
63. listen to more GO FISH music
64. listen to Chris Tomlin more
65. to shut the lights off when you leave a room
66. to listen to STAR 88.3 more
67. to buy more toys
68. to buy more models
69. to fly in a plane
70. to fly the plane
71. to cut down less trees
72. to use less paper
73. to never give up
74. to play more basketball
75. to play more 2 hand touch
76. to go to camp
77. to go to the park
78. to pick up litter
79. to buy more snowmen
80. to eat more peeps
81. to drink more hot cocoa
82. to have more snowball fights
83. to outlaw snowballs in the face :)
84. to watch more Charlie Brown
85. to have more holidays
86. to have more family time
87. to help your mom
88. to help your dad
89. to help your family more
90. to watch more Star Wars
91. to drink less soda
92. to drink more water and milk
93. to whine less
94. to visit relatives more often
95. to have a longer summer break
96. to learn to use a camera
97. to play more
98. to participate in anything without being in a certain grade
99. to get a job
100. to make a shorter list than this :)
TIM
School
ReplyDelete------------------------------------------------
Longer reaces
have the kids at middle school have reaces
Have the other kids see the new school
Get to go to Star wars.com-
Get to go to Transformers.com
Get to play exirsise games in the gym
Get to play hyper dash in the gym.
Get to watch a movie in class
Get to lison to music in class
Get to have motsarela sticks for lunch agian
Have a friend (like tim and kayla) get to stay after school
see you in writing,
Matt D. :)
i will tell my mom if i could call my ant i will tell her if we could go to birger king it will be fun i beaged if i could go she said yes it fun have you went to birger king.
ReplyDeletefamily
ReplyDelete.do i have to do my chores
.can we go outside please
school
.can we eat lunch
.can we see the new school
city
.stop smoking
.pick up the trash now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
your friend,
Kayla
uhhhhhh...I am going to clean the world, I am going to pick up trash at school,Tell my parent's when we leave turn off the light's.That is all I could think of.-SARAH:)
ReplyDeleteParents School
ReplyDeleteNO PUNISHMENTS Less school
Less choirs No work only writing
MORE FOOD 2 LUNCHS
More outside time More Recess
City World
No smoking No meanies
No Mean guys Kids as presadint
MORE FOOD MORE FOOD for poor
Kids as Mayor More baseball fields
parents
ReplyDeleteget us in sports more often P.S. so we don`t get to fat watching t.v.
practas more with us or let us practas by our self P.S. so we can get better score off cors.
School
folow the golden rule P.S. so we can have a better world.
donate $ to new school.
City
pick up trash when you see it P.S. so we can have a shiny world.
help older peaple.
go doun on gas prices
WORLD
go down on gas prices
folow golden rule.
1. To have no rules
ReplyDelete2. No school
3. Stop the war
4. To not go to the Ymca
5. More football
6.
family...
ReplyDeletecan i call my dad?
can we go to sarahs house?
can we go to mcdonles?
do i have to clean my room?
school...
can i go to the bathroom?
can i go to the nurse?
is it almost recess?
is it almost time to go home?
city...
where is the libery?
why do we have to stop at all of the lights?
are we almost there?
world...
why are there bad people?
how would i talk if i lived in a diffrent
part of the world?
what would i be like if there was no world?
Autum
to lower gas prices.
ReplyDeleteto get more exercise.
donate money to our new school.
to have more vacations.
to have more field trips.
to stop the drug dealing
smoking
to have no more fighting.
more recess.
only have i step once in your life.
have more character.
anna
1 world
ReplyDelete2 stop war
3 stop violence
4 stop pollution
5 start recycling
6 stop smokeing
7 save the trees
8don't through trash around at reccess
9 make changes
10 stop drilling greed
11 some how get parents to get poke mon platnem
12 save the animals while you can
13 get Kierstynn to clean my room more
14 get Cody to help me spell more words
15 get Kierstynn to stop asking me for help on video games
Logan
To persuade people to do:
ReplyDelete1. to recycle
2. to excercise
3. more time to ride my atv's
4. end the war
5. clean up garbage(litter) in city
6. not to bully in school
7. donate to the needy
8. to serve teriyaki chicken for lunch every day
9. the cop to not give you a speeding ticket
10.my brother to leave me alone
Dustin S.
-less HOMEWORK!
ReplyDelete-more cheeseburgers
-less price for POKe'MON toys
-more POKe'MON toys
-more POKe'MON T.V. shows
-MORE POKe'MON!!!
-15 more min. for resses
-less light
-biger school lunches... ... ...pleese?
-moveing sidewalks
Matthew F. :|
Nabil says...
ReplyDeleteworld
stop the war.
no smoking.
give your mom a hug.
give poor people money and food.
don't be a dangers.
don;t do dangers things.
don't follaw angers people and if they tell you come i have ice cream for don't go to people who you don't know.
BE cool
To believe bugs are neat.
ReplyDeleteFrogs are fun.
Weeding the garden is fun.
To eat out more.
Playing with your big sister/ brother can be fun.
Picking up sticks can be fun.
Cooking is fun.
Moving can be fun.
Working to take a fence out of the ground is fun.
Watching the sun rise is fun.
Baking a cake is fun.
Baking cookies is fun.
Picking up rocks out of the grass is fun.
Blowing up a tire is fun.
Learning to play guitar is fun.
Sing Johnny Cash is fun.
Writing stories is fun.
Reading is fun.
Taking a nap is fun.
Staying home when your sick is fun.
Going to the doctor is fun.
Feeding the koi is fun.
Feeding the dogs is fun.
Going fishing is fun.
Catching a bass is fun.
Swinging really high is fun.
Making a tent is fun.
Camping is fun.
Driving to Ohio is fun.
Cleaning out Grandma's house is fun.
Growing plants is fun.
Fighting with Daddy is fun.
Shopping is fun.
Going to see Grandma in the nursing home is fun.
Jacee