Good writers use feeling when they are writing. Think back to a memory you have. What were you feeling? Why did you feel that way? Write a story telling about that time. Describe it and use strong words.
Remember that authors like Patricia Polacco always use feeling in their books and she is not alone.
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Arizona
ReplyDeleteZOOM ZOOM! Went the airplane as I was weeping happeiness to get to Arizona. I could not beleve my eyes when I saw Arizona. "Oh WOW"I said as I almost fainted.My mom was like "Grab your stuff NOW!"I think she was exsited.
Taylor C.
Well once there was a girl named Cassandra. She loved her famly. So her mom and dad said well your couisns are coming over and I screand. I had not seen them in five years. There names are Colin, Hayden,and Theodora. I was SOOOOOO happy and I coud not wait. I just coud not wait. So one day thay came. I ran to give them a hug. I could not help it. They came all the way from AUSTRALIA. But when it was time for them to leave, I cried.
ReplyDeleteThe spy gear story that I wrote back in secend grade I added a lot of funny parts. Like the hit yourself with 19,000 tiger steal bricks. Also the part when the towering figer with the sharp knife in his hudge hands. Also I put a lot of funny parts in my secend spy gear book. Like the dummy. And the kung-fu moves in the team spy gear headquarters.
ReplyDeleteI feal kid of proud when I write storys like The ones above. I want to make people laugh about what they are reading in these spy gear books. Writing takes a wile, but in a few days or yeaks or monthes, you will have books published.
See you in writing,
Matt D. :.>
one time when tristen was in the hospetle my mom and i stayted for a wyil i fell asleep in a big comfy chair. i felt jellis because i new that all of the atenchn was going to him. heres why i felt jellis becase every boty was like ahhhhhhhhhhh and i was like ah.
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I would do my chores everyday I vacumm,dishes,laundary,clean my room,and I have to make my bed,and I have to do it everyday and on the weekends it is really hard to do it.I do my homework first then do my chores.It is really hard to do it. -Sarah
ReplyDeleteOn Noveber 28,2007(my birthday) my grandma Virginia died.Two days later her funeral day was at the church my grandma Pam got married. My uncle Daniel took me to the funeral and once I got there we went up to see my grandma Virginia. I looked at her then I backed up into my uncle Daniel crying.I went to sit down but i saw my aunt Angie and my cousins Cody and Jessie. I went to see them. They had this tv with pictures of Virginia(Granny). I went to watch them. I cried two times while I was over there. It was over after that. I still pray for my Granny.
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HI, I'm Shannon I love to write because of the best writing teacher ever her name is Mrs.J she is an awsome writeing teacher.I feel that if you write with feeling you will have the best story ever. If you just say I felt really sad you have to use detale hope you find describeing words in my story.
ReplyDeleteHere is my story:One day I was so exsided because we were going to Ohio half my family lives there and I don't see them much which make me sad because I miss them.
But anyway thet's get back to the story.
MOM ARE WE THERE YET! or ARE WE CLOSE??? Is what my mom got tired of hearing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! when we got there I was so exsided and I gave all of my cousins and aunts hugs bye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SHANNON D.
when I was a little girl Iwould always cry because my mommy wsan't sleeping with me she would always sleep with my daddy.She kept escapeing when I was asleep.The reason why is because I was a;ways scared,I was afrad that a gast or a robber would steal me. I was pretty dumb Iwas so scared I'm still scared.Don't even think that I'm you know what.What would you do if your mom doesn't want to sleep with you? Think about it,let me know, tell me,please.
ReplyDeleteLike you'll always know MALANA
Last year my dad let me trade my four wheeler. I was to big for it and couldn't ride it anymore. Which I was disappointed and upset cause my cousins rode theirs. So he let me make the decision which made me happy to have the choice. So I decided to trade for a small dirt bike. I was really happy cause I was able to ride the dirt bike.
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One time at football we were playing hamburger, I was vsing Tte' and he hit me in the spine. I was hurt critically and I feelt sad it hurt a lot. After that I was aying, "My spine is broken."
ReplyDeleteSee ya',
Logan
COSTA RICA!!!
ReplyDeletewhen i went to Costa Rica it was thee best thing. best vacation ever!!!! i had a good time. i bet you would to. it was soooooo super duper sad . there was this 3 year old boy named Anthony he was my best friend. there. my other part of my family was working on a school for the orfens . when we came back to our hotel we had a hole bag of peanuts and when we came back puff gone there was like only 3 of them left. we thought the made ate them when she was cleaning.when we had to come back i was bawling the minute we left.when we came back i wrote and wrote and wrote about my mimres there . by anna
My memory is the time I went to the Toledo Zoo. the night before, I was sooo excited, I could hardly sleep, but I knew I had to get some sleep, or I would be too tired when I got there. The morning of, I got ready, still excited, I got in the truck, and off we went. Once we got there my brother and I ran into the zoo, to see all the animals. The zoo was so amazing, I got to finally see an elephant for the first time in my life, I was so surprised. We took time out for our picnic of chicken, hot dogs, and etc. because everyone was very hungery. We continued to see the rest of the zoo, and by the end of the day, I was very exhausted, and glad to be going home.
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My christmas vacation
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We were driving down to visit our relitives.I was SOOOOO bored!"When will we be there?" "Soon." Da da da da da da da da da da da da da da da da da da da(the jeperdy song)SHADAP!!!why?WERE HERE!!FINALY!! Megan!!THE NEXT DAY...We were in washington D.C. We walked all of washing D.C. I was crying because my feet hurt sooo much.It was the best christmas vacation ever!!