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Give It A Chance
One time it was my birthday and I had got some littlest pet shop but I had not gotten the thing I wanted most of all the Barbie cashrester I wanted that for 52236985124365 years really I only wanted it for a year now this was my chance to get it. And then I opened up a corner of my last present it said BARBIE.Could that be the thing I always wanted. then I opened it the rest of the way and guess what it was it. that was my best birthday ever.but there are also other birthdays that are left!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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What surpised me.When I got a new dog it is a begale his name is Jake.He is 1 years old.He is almost 2 years old.He barks very loud which hurts our ears.He is a very fast and smart dog.He comes right to you when you call his name.He always loves it when one of our friends come over and he starts sniffing them and licking them.-Sarah
ReplyDeleteSomething that suprised me hmmmm.Oh yeah when I went to Adilen's house and saw Emily.Shes so cute when she smiles every time i went there she got cuter cuter cuter and cuter . And all the toys Adilen had.It suprised me alot........
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Hailee S.
yesterday I found out it snowed and it was wet and heavy and it tore one side off the tree and plus my grandma said she heard a cracking noise. pahge
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ReplyDeleteyesterday I can't belive i did a cartwheel on the beam. everybody said kayla you can do it. but i said no i can't. then i was scared when i did it the first time. then i fell off. because my coach said you have to do it by yourself. (everybody) so i did it a nother time i did it i landed on the beam. i was so happy that i did it again. my friend Breanna she had to do a back roll. then she did it and stuck it. good job Breanna. your friend,
Kayla
Saterday, March 28th
ReplyDeleteAfter dropping Tim off at his house and picking up William we went to the super eveil most boring place in the history of the world. In other words, we went to Wall Mart. We had to get a lot of stuff. After we went to the non-grocry isle we got to go look at the Transformers and the Spy Gear. There was nothing good there so we got to look at the movies. We were just about to leve the movie isle when something caught my eye. I got Will and Mom to come back. And do you know what we saw? I'm not going to tell you. Okay, okay I'll tell you. It was the ultamit collection of Transformers Energon. Yipe!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I was so happy. It had been months sence the ultamit colection of Transformers Cybertron came out. Anyway, it was awsome. We got it. In a few months I expect the ultamit colection of Transformers Armada to come out.
See you in writing,
Matt D.
This Cristmas we went to my grandpas house everybody was there and there was presants stuffed under the tree.The hole time we ate and staired at the presants I was wondering what they got me.I wanted to know so bad that I was trying to peek.Buuuuuut I couldent because there my grandpa was looking the hole time.Then finly we started opening presants. Then I thought I was done opening presants but I wasn`t there was still one left.It was mine!!!!I wonder what it is I said.Then my mom said"I don`t know open it and see"?It was long,skiny,and hevy.So I opened it....It was a bb gun just what I wanted!!!!Thanks grandpa and grandma.If you dident get it for me I would of buyt it my self.It was brown and it had a scope that came with it and it had a pump on it and it was just my size. Then it was time to go after we gotdone playing.Buy. DAMIAN
ReplyDeleteOn December 16,2008 itwas my birthday.I got a few birthday presents from,Shannon,Nicki,Madi,and my Mom.I got a Micky Mouse pjs from my Mom,I got a piture frame of Shannon and I on the first day of school,I got few more things from Madi,and Nicki but I forget what they are.But their was two more cards and presents.When I went over to my dad's house sorry we that we forgot about your birthday party.But I was speach less because they forgot my birthday party!(but they didn't litterly forget it.But all we did was not fun.Don't even ask me!!!!!!!!!! (I'm not saying it's all about the presents.It's about having a great time!)Your Friend,Mckenzie
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ReplyDeleteI woke up.And mom said it`s snowing. Sure.Whatever.I crept to the window, I covered my mouth.I planed to get away before my mom caught me.TO LATE.She caught me. She said that I was wrong and she was right.
LATER ALIGATER Taylor C.
Last year I was so surprised when my 4-H mentor David gave me a lop eared rabbit. I got all the stuff I needed the next day because it was my
ReplyDeleteBIRTHDAY!!!!!!!!All I got was a bunch of great bunny stuff!It was great day for me. Now my brothers on the other hand wanted to make bunny steak and the dog did too. Mom wouldn't let them.
-Tim
When I stayed the night at my grandpa and grandma's house. We played hide and go seek in the dark with flashlights. It was fun until they scared the crap out of me. They hide and we had to try to find them. Grandma surprised me right when I waiked into the door. She went "BOO!" Then me and my cousin went screaming because she scared us. We went running to the bathroom because it was the closest thing to us to hide and lock the door.
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One day my dad said, "I am going to get a wood splitter". He came back hours later with an ATV.
ReplyDeleteI was so surprised I ran out. My dad gave us a ride. Then he told me it was mine.
One day in kindergarten I was lined up to go home, when I saw a green truck. It was my dad! he had something in the back of his truck I couldn't tell what It was but when he pulled up (gasp) It was a new ATV for me! The class was as excited as I was. When I got home, my dad took me a ride on my new four-wheeler, I didn't want to get off of it.
ReplyDeleteOne day I was sitting on my bed and Kierstynn came and got me and she told me we are going to Kalahari and I was HAPPY
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daddy. can i have a rabbit for my birthday. maybe anna i don't know. please. pretty please. with a cherry on top.I'll take care of them. water them every day.even play with them. daddy my birthday is tomorrow!! 1 month later dad. please. okay fine. but you have to promise you will take care of them. okay. harry im going to get a rabbit tomorrow .i want this and this one. i will name you thumper&banbi. im soooooo surprised that dad bought me a rabbits. and a copple months latter my sister got 2 rabbits to .well now i have to go bye love anna
ReplyDeleteone time i was at a all girl party and one boy. and guess how was a lone yaa that s righ me. it was the most EXCITING time in my LIFE. i was dancing with him. he asked me to dance with him. he was pretty cute. but i got to walk down an ile but not with him it was with my sisters. i was happy that i got to walk with my sisters because i love them and i dont get to see them very much. after the dance i called my mom and told her that i got asked to dance with a really cute boy. she said WHAT!! but then she was happy because i got to dance and then i came home.
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a suprise
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and said nabil wake up and i said what he said
close your eye's and my little brother openend the window my brother ahmed and my big brother abdullah said nabil open your eye's and i opened my eye's and it was snow and i watched tv and i saw it was two hours daily and i ate breakfast and i went uot side and it was time to go to school and i saw snow balls are coming threw me and i said stop and it was the high schoolers and the muiddle schoolers against kingarden and 1 grade and 2 grade and 3 grade. we fighted w9ith snow balls until there bus came and we threw bunch of snow ball on them and i missed i hitted the bus.